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Location: Illinois
As you can see, I'm pretty partial to foxes...
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This flash is full of win.
I could watch it for hours, but I might start thinking my life needs moar yiff.
Author's Response:
what is win
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It's not bad. It's just that there are many elements that are missing.
One huge issue is that it needs sound. I's hard to believe that a few sound effects and/or some background music can turn someone's vote from a 1 to a 4.
Another thing is that it's too short and basic. Now don't confuse simple with basic. A simple movie can be a great thing, if it's pulled off correctly. What I mean is that this movie is nothing more than, "Fox. Fox scratches off flea. Fox tries to eat flea. The end."
I do have one compliment for this flash. I really liked the artwork in this. At least the fox was well drawn, and the frame-by-frame animation makes it a lot more visually appealing than the alternative.
So I give this one a 5/10. It has potential. Improve on this flash, and it can be something great.
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As far as a demo goes, it's not bad.
But I would definitely want to see the completed version of this.
Other than "add more stuff, My only suggestion is to make the size a bit smaller. 1000X700 is a bit overwhelming.
Author's Response:
The size is smaller, 800X700, NewGrounds will not accept any bigger. I just need some more ideas for Ranos(the crokacoon) and it will be done.
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